It wasn’t really a persuasive essay. The point and the facts are good but how the way the writer explains those points it’s not goodly explain. This essay is really hard to understand and it’s kind of dull. The author presents a range of points that attempt to induce that reader that media violence is in fact a harmful influence.
At initial the author talked concerning Media Violence was a cause of all the violence in this world and he used the example of the Virginia Tech Killer. He said how he possibly got mainly of his sick plans and information from some Korean or Asian films. The writer also prearranged his piece in an understandable and organized way.
I think this essay is more look like a formal essay but the quality of his writing as in devices, structure, etc make it effective.
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You included strong points about the persuasive essay! Great job
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