This article was very clear on its opinion regarding how the media influences adolescents and youths. This editorial was not very well done, for one written in the formal tone. It uses too many informal devices, such as reader inclusion, as it constantly refers to "We, our" among others.
Travis Ryan kept a consistent formal tone throughout his persuasive writing essay. He brought up several points, which amazed me. He brings up Hollywood, which barely comes into the spotlight when talking or relating the consequences to violence.
Even though this piece was written in formal tone it seems more informal. For a formal tone author does not address the audience directly. However, in this essay he addressed them directly.
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