Adolescent and the media (informal tone and structure):

This informal toned persuasive writing seems much longer that the other one, but compared to the formal tone version of it, it was done better. It more like a fact/information paper, rather than trying to persuade the reader or audience.

He quoted extensively throughout this work, meaning that his work can be is legit and the information can be true and persuading. He also brings evidence using the violence portrayed in Disney's cartoons, to show the extent of violence in today’s media, and to show that we consider violence has a broad meaning. Each of his paragraphs is almost equally important and he successfully used the informal tone through his paragraphs.The essay was clear in thoughts and well organized. It was riches with different rhetorical and literary devices, which made it stronger, affective, and attractive to the readers. The author mainly used repetition, allusion, rhetorical question, anecdote, cause and effect.

Comparing with the previous essays where the authors haven’t quoted their work, as many as Victor has, his work seems well researched. The content compared with the previous samples, they were more essay written than this one.